Tuesday 17 September 2013

The Laptop

BLUE
is my laptops desktop
where I can open my programmes.

BLACK
is my loudspeaker of my laptop
from there come many noises.

GREY
like the background colour
of my favourite website.
RED
like the logo of Opera
my favourite program.
GREEN
like the button
where I can make
the CPU-channel higher.
BROWN
like the logo
of my download program
with him I download
my stuff.
 WHITE
is the primary colour
of my room
where my laptop is.

3 comments:

  1. Similar to the previous posters, I also find your idea to write about your laptop very original.

    Just some small remarks:
    - make sure to add apostrophes, e.g.: in "my laptop's desktop"
    - noise is usually only used in the singular, so it's better to say "a lot of noise"
    - a program is an it, so it should be "with which I download"

    Super use of the word "primary".

    Good job!

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