Friday, 20 September 2013

My Color Poem

                                                                               Red
                                                            Is the color of my favourite book,
                                                                        I read it five times.
                                                                    
                                                                             Yellow
                                                           Is my favourite english dictionary,
                                                              where I can learn new words.

                                                                               Blue
                                                            is the color of the beautiful sky,
                                                                where i look up every day.

                                                                              Green
                                                                    is my favourite color,
                                                                 because all I like is green. 

                                                                              Brown
                                                                  Is the last name of Chris,
                                                                     who is a famous star. 

                                                                             White
                                                          Is the color I cant write on this blog,
                                                            because the background is white.

                                                                 

                                                                 

1 comment:

  1. Good job! I think my favourite part is the colour brown where you write about Chris Brown. It adds an interesting twist to your poem.

    Two things about the language:
    - when you use short forms, please use apostrophes (can't rather than cant). It is fine to use short forms in poetry but make sure that they do not look like typoes.
    - to look up to the sky; the sky I look up to every day.

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