The capital city of Australia is Canberra but many people think its Sydney maybe because the olympic summer games were there 2000.
Canberra and Sydney are on the New South Wales.
In Australia there are many desert in which many animals are like snakes maybe kangaroo.
On the Ocean or in the Sea there are also many animals like the blue ring octopus ,sharks and crocodiles .
This island has a lot of popular sights like The Great Barrier Reef,Sydney Opera House. The Ayers Rock which is also called as Uluru ,which is very holy for the original inhabitant which is are also called as aborigine.
Another sights are also #1 Melbourne Museum ,#2 Australian Zoo,#3 Melbourne Aquarium or #4 Sydney Harbour Bridge which is one of the most popular sights.
I would like to live Australia because the are very fine beaches and the weather is the way I like it.
But I would not go because I am afraid that animals would bite me......
Some Pictures :)
A cool text, Ben!
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DeleteGood text and nice pictures! I like the koala bear :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteInteresting theory that people confuse Sydney and Canberra because the Olympics were held in Sydney in 2000. That definitely plays a role as well. I like how you included this personal opinion in your text.
ReplyDeleteLanguagewise theren are some things to pay attention to:
- check the spelling of population again and remember when to use a and an (an only in front of vowels)
- a population of 23 million people (no need to use "of" there)
- whenever you use contractions (i.e.: can't insteand of cannot/can not) please make sure to add an apostrophe so that it is clear that you are using a short form and did not just make a mistake
- IN the ocean
I can understand how you do not want to be stung my spiders or get bitten by snakes but as long as you stay in the cities and watch where you are walking in the forests and deserts, the risk isn't too high.
I am sure you will go there one day!