Colours
Red
is the colour I see when I
look at my blood
Yellow
is the colour which nobody
canread because it is so bright
Orange
was the colour my friend hairs
have that's why I call him
carrot
Green
is the colour I like
because it's the colour I can connect with
freedom
Blue
is the colour I love most
because it is the colour of
the sky
Brown
is the colour i didn't find
for my poem
that's why i have to take
violet
Black
is the colour I can not see in
the darkness
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ReplyDeleteVery cool poem! The colour brown is very funny! ;D
ReplyDeleteThx your own is awesome ;)
DeleteThank you ;*
DeleteBrown and black is awesome.:-)
ReplyDeleteHaha thx
DeleteBrown and black is awesome.:-)
ReplyDeleteCool poem Benedict!
ReplyDeleteThank you martina
Deletebrow nice poem. fun to read but i think it is too colorful. it was difficult to read because the colors blow my mind
ReplyDeleteLuzhen
DeleteA very daring use of colours (yellow is a bit hard to read, at least on my screen).
ReplyDeleteSimilar to the other posters, I find your choice for the colour brown very entertaining and your association with "green" very beautiful.
Just one remark:
- it is hair not hairs, unless you are talking about your friend's body hair