White
like the
world
when you
open your eyes
like the
moon
when
you’re born
like the
grass
where
you are lying
like
your face
when you
eat spinach
Blue
like
your eyes
that I
never forget how much I love you
like the
sky
that you
love so much
Red
like
your first school bag
that you
are proud of
like the
blood on your knees
when you are falling down
Silver
like your
studs
in your
face
like the
tears
when I miss you
Violet
like
your hair
when you
came to me asking for help
like the
bed
where
you sleep now again
like
your new house
where you
live for the rest of your life
like your
beautiful hair
without
any colour
Black
like the
end of the live
and the
end of my words
A cool idea!
ReplyDeleteThank you!!;)
DeleteNot bad!
ReplyDeleteWell done, Sophie.
ReplyDeleteI really like the contrast you created in some of the paragraphs. I think my favourite is probably the opposition between silver studs, which I rather associate with something agressive or harsh and then the soft tears on the other side.
Just one thing:
- remember the different between "to liVe" and "a liFe"