Red
Like a
bleeding body
on a bed of roses
like the
fire
in my heart
Blue
Like the rain
that falls
in front of my window
like the tears
falling from my eyes
Silver
Like the ring
on my finger
So beautiful
and bright
like the
knife in my hand
so stainless
and strong
Green
Like my
dress
floating in the
wind
like your
eyes in the sunlight
so shiny and
bright
White
Like the paper
I’m holding
with the
letter so lovely
like the
flesh of the dead
so cold and
liveless
You wrote a really good text and the "coloured things" are really interesting!
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DeleteWow love your text!!!<3
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Deletewow - your poem gave me goosebumps!
ReplyDeleteVery well written and quite similar to Sophie's poem I appreciate the constrasts in some of your paragraphs very much. I think my favourite is the very first one where you associate the vivid colour of red with both a bleeding body and a roaring fire.
Awesome job!