The colour poem
White
was the rocket
that brought neil in the infinite space
to the moon
and back to earth
Blue
was the earth
that he stared at
and the colour
of the life of neil
Green
was the rest of earth
and also his hope to come back
and the hope to see all his friends again
Brown
is the colour of the ground he took off
and the ground he will be standing when he lands back on it
Red
is the evil
who could messup their whole plan
and also the parchute
that will save their live
Black
is the infinite space
and the place between him and earth
the end of life
great idea!!
ReplyDeleteCool text !
ReplyDeleteYour poem is great! I thought you would write about this stuff. :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome choice of topic for your colour poem!
ReplyDeleteMakes me want to travel to space straight away.
Just two, three tiny things:
- make sure to spell names with capital letters.
- the ground he will be standing ON when he lands back on it
- to mess up (a space between mess and up)
A wonderful idea and a super text.
Well done!