THIS
IS A WEBSITE ABOUT FAIRTRADE AND RACISM
By
Robert Pfaff &Sascha Obermayer
Fairtrade:
At first we want to tell you
Fairtrade is a company who makes a lot of projects which gives
people a fair price for their products, so they can buy food,
clothes and pay the school for their kids.
(these
are the States that produce the most chocolate)
Ivory
Coast: 37.1%
Ghana:
21.9%
Indonesia:
11.2%
Nigeria:
5.9%
Brazil:
5.5%
Cameroun:
5.2%
Ecuador:4.8%
The
people who live there first didn't know when they get money and when
not. When Fairtrade came to them they gave them a fixed price for
their cocoa bean and so there life went better.
Racism:
Racism is a hot topic that erveryone of us knows. Ervery 15th
white human is a racist. The most people are racist about ethical
issues and bodycolour. But the question is WHY?
Our decision is that racis people are scared to lose there jobs
because they work for a cheeper price.
If you have the same meaning of us come to one of our meetings and
discuss with others about it. More infomations on :www.fakelink.com
Dear Sascha and Robert,
ReplyDeletethank you very much for your post. However, I would like you to have another look at the guidelines for a website in your SB and re-write your post.
Some comments about language & form:
- If you want to provide a list of countries that produce chocolate (like you did), you need to introduce and explain this list as well. It is not enough to merely post names and percentages. Add some information on why you chose chocolate-producing countries, maybe you can also find some information on how much of this chocolate is fair trade etc.
- where did you find the information about racist white humans? provide some information in this.
- watch out for typos (Tippfehler) - they make your text look sloppy
- meaning does not mean "Meinung" but "Bedeutung". you could say "if you agree with us"