Wednesday, 25 September 2013

My book review


By the river

by Steven Herrick

Today I’d like to tell you something about the book “By the river“. The book is about a boy called Harry. I think that he’s the person who tells us the story. At first he talks about his house, that isn’t really nice and his dad who doesn’t want to decorate it. And then there are some parts of his life that aren’t longer than three minutes. Together the parts produce a story.

 

I think that this book is very interesting but also difficult to read. It’s not logical all the time but I like it. I didn’t understand everything but I understood the important things. If you like poems than you should read it.

My rating:JJJJ
 
 
Sophie Liebert

Tuesday, 24 September 2013

My Book Review


Rating: ***** 


By the River
by Steven Herrick


Hey, now here I am going to introduce to you the book " BY THE RIVER " by Steven Herrick.

First of all there was a father in a hospital. He couldn't believe it, that his friend slipped on a banana and broke his nuts. Impossible, he said but his friend showed him the converse.  He took a patch of daisies, but he wasn't alone. No, there was me, Uncle Filps, Mum, Dad and the always drunk aunty Nancy. 
Someone, sometimes he had the thought that it would happen to him. Just the thought about it, made him weak. His mood changes were like a storm season. Sometimes he screams and sometimes he shouts.
But everything changed when the hot doctor came in and greeted him. His eyes only focused on her face and they talked and laughed.
Two years later, Harry was born.....

Attention: 
When you read the text below you are probably going to like this book - I'm not showing off!!!!

I think this book is so awesome that I can't even explain how awesome it is :) 
Even if you haven't dealt with same problem before, like the guy who broke his nuts, the book makes it really easy to understand what the characters are going through. I was able to compassion a little bit. ^.^
Whenever I started to read the verse novel, I got so drawn into the book that I could create intensive movies in my head of what was going on and what each of the characters was doing or thinking about. I never got bored, I felt as if I was sitting there with the characters, so smooth was the flow of the poem. If you are ready for an emotional roller coaster (and it does not get you down too much) than read this verse novel. You wouldn't regret it!!

TEEEHHEEEEEEE! 

Written by Luzhen Gong


MY BOOK REVIEW

BY THE RIVER
** (my Rating System)                                                      by Steven Herrick
 
In this book there is a boy, who is called Harry, and he tells the readers at first, about his cold town, where he lives with his father in a house, which is smeared in oil. One time, he gets into a fight and it ends with a bloody nose and a swollen lip, but the important thing for him was at this time, that he tried to defend the house. His house.
 
One day, a new girl comes into his class, it was Claire Honey. They become friends and they are sometimes at the big river to swim together.
Another day, he tries to cut a melon, but then the knife slips and cuts the fingers of his father.
At the end Wayne Barlow blabs Keith and Harry to Miss Spencer, so Harry is going to hate him forever.
This book was OK for me, but I think that I wouldn’t read a book like this, again, because these poems are confusing and sometimes I don’t understand the words or the whole story.
I think that this book is for people, who like poems. So read it, if you like poems!
 


Monday, 23 September 2013

Colours of my live

Black
Is the colour of the shoes from which I dream of.
White
Is the colour of the paper before I draw.
Yellow
Is the colour of the smelly cheese I love so much.
Orange
Is the colour of my Mum`s McGyver DVD Box.
Blue
Is the colour of Papa Smurf`s Porsche.
Green
Is the colour of my family`s favourite soccer club.
Red
Is the colour of my face, when I`ve been in the sun for too long.
Brown
Is the colour of my eyes and chocolate. Girls like both!
Purple
Is the colour of the most disgusting vegetable ever.
Pink
Is the only colour my Mum is allergic too.
                                                                                                                           Sascha Obermayer 4.C


                                                                   Colours

Black
is the colour which
you see in the darkness
or like batman

white
is a sheed of paper
or a white pen, a towel that's
white too

blue
is the colour of the ocean
it is a colour that is beutiful
or raintrop

green
is the colour is see
when i'm lying in the grass
or a greenboard

violet
is the colour by
flowers or wonderful birds
it is a a great colour


red
is the colour by the
sun, blood and the
 colour by foxs

Sunday, 22 September 2013

My Poem

Colours

Red
is the colour I see when I
look at my blood
Yellow
is the colour which nobody
canread because it is so bright
Orange
was the colour my friend hairs
have that's why I call him
carrot 
Green
is the colour I like 
because it's the colour I can connect with
freedom
Blue
is the colour I love most
because it is the colour of 
the sky
Brown
is the colour i didn't find 
for my poem
that's why i have to take 
violet
Black
is the colour I can not see in
the darkness
The colour poem
 White
was the rocket
that brought neil in the infinite space
to the moon
and back to earth

Blue
was the earth 
that he stared at
and the colour
of the life of neil

Green
 was the rest of earth
and also his hope to come back
and the hope to see all his friends again

Brown
is the colour of the ground he took off
and the ground he will be standing when he lands back on it

Red
is the evil
who could messup their whole plan   
and also the parchute 
  that will save their live

Black
is the infinite space
and the place between him and earth
the end of life